Hmm
the graphics were prtty good and they werent choppy, but the music bout drove me up the wall. maybe you could put a loop on there that loops smoothly and is a little longer then 1-2seconds.
Hmm
the graphics were prtty good and they werent choppy, but the music bout drove me up the wall. maybe you could put a loop on there that loops smoothly and is a little longer then 1-2seconds.
not bad for a first
i have seen better, no offense, but i have seen worse. much worse. it's not to bad though, it's relatively smooth, and it flows nicely. although i don't personally believe it should stay on newgrounds, (since newgrounds is for the longer movies, spoofs, and what not) i do like it. it's better than what i can do, sapeaking that i don't have flash studio. it's cute. good luck in the future man
Uh Huh...............
I agree with Toasterman13 the graphoc are good for a nOOB, but the sound was very poor, you should atleast make the loop smooth
ok
No length and no creativity
not bad
You need to have more than a stick dancing but your fbf work is very smooth. I would stay away from sticks as they are becoming old and quite boring. Use that stick as the framework for a character to model from. You need to create a story and something with a bit of humour or action. This is a good stepping stone for future work.