great!
i would've given it a 9 or even a 10 possibly if not for a couple minor errors. your graphics were really great, and the storyline was touching to say the least. your use of color was very well done, but for the tiny errors i found: your text often scrolled over something important or off of the screen. just a simple problem with making sure you're clearing the boundaries. try to keep text from going over the subject. also, you could probably use voice-acting in future movies. but for this one i didn't really mind the text. anyway, great job, especially for your first "real" flash. looking forward to more.