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Well i've got good news and bad news. the bad news is that your voice dubbing sux. and if it was you who did it, you have a horrible lisp. find somebody that is easier to understand and can actually talk. I also didn't like the DBZ-like influence. some of it was alright, but with the spirit bomb thing, that was just too much. so change that.
on a good point, i love you drawing style, im an artist myself and the way you draw is very very nice. so keep up the artistic look.
I would give this movie a ten, however becuz of the DBZ-ness and the lisp/dubbing, i have to give it an 8. but i cant wait till the next one comes.