It's good, but can be better.
Your submission was pretty good. The only thing I se that needs improving is the use of sounds, like silent and loud gunfire, the bullets hitting the glass and the glass shattering. Not trying to be picky, but if the Hitman has his left index finger on the trigger, the butt of the rifle should be pressed against his left shoulder. Other than those two things, it was quite good. I'm looking forward to seeing the other parts ^_^
Thanks, I'll try more good ones
Bland and slow
Better sound would have helped you could have made it faster to help get rid of the pain it to to stop from closeing it. I can only hope that you take that in to account for the next part if there is one ok Better sound more action and faster moving.
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I like it alot itsa pretty cool , and the gun was decently accurate, i mean the stock even had a thumb hole on it, what was that thing in the front for, i mean on the front of the stock , was it suppose to be a bi pod that was folded down or what? Great animation and nice muzzle flash from the targets guns also.
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Nice graphics, i like the style you have here, and the detail you have put into this is really nice, you can tell you put a lot of good effort into this animation. The hitman seems like an interesting person, and i like the way you animation the violence that he causes. The music goes well here, and i hope you make more soon...
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Thank you
Great work!
This was great, its good to see a full episode after the trailer. It allows me to see how much progress you have made, and its good to see the real development in the story. This was a little different than the other flash i have seen, i ill explain that and every other aspect briefly in my review.
I liked the graphics they were very artistic. The shadows and such were very well done. I love the first scene with the light shinimg on the dust, it created a really cool effect. I loved the main menu aswell. The colours were nice and i enjoyed the backrounds. Your animating style was impressive in my opinion. Your overall style in this was great too. A big part of this goes to your animating style, which i have alredy said was great. I loved the feel to this movie, how the animation worked with the music and the way this idea was presented. The idea is pretty cool as well. I liked the music a lot for a couple reasons. It was an original piece and really helped create the mood and feel very well. The only thing bad about sound is that lack of sound effects, i dont recall hearing any at all.
Overall very well done. I really liked it, the trailer was a great way to get this noticed. Anyways i hope the next part will be even better. Keep up the great work! 4/5
You're review was VERY helpfull, thanks :)