pretty good actually
At first I didnt think I would like it, but after the plot was set up, it wasnt that bad. A few tips for your next movie:
1. don't use brown text on a dark background (or any dark colored text, its hard to read)
2. set the timing on the dialog according to how many words. ex: short sentence, short pause, long sentence, long pause.
3. Credits were too slow, i didnt watch all of em.
Good luck on your next movie.