Yep..
Rather than just give you my two cents, bitch about your movie and tell you what to do, I wanna give you some pointers.
You should definitely have some better dialogue, I chuckled a tiny bit about the lesbian bit, but that's it. I've had some experience with scripting a sprite movie, (Super Smash All stars, Final Fantasy Sonic X) and if you're interested, you can contact me via Instant messenger for some script.
Your characters walk slow, and the guars moved rather.. sluggish. Link's voice should be more authentic.. like, let's say, maybe scottish? Or Irish? I mean, he wars all that green.. you'd think he'd be that way. Navi's voice should be better, no offense to the actor. Ah, but the voice actor for Mei Ling (Kagome was it?) Man.. she's real good. Keep her.
There's some serious potiential here, Metal Gear Zelda, heh. For some issues about the actionscripting and flash and all that, you oughta contact BDX via AIM (TAZJR4) and if you'd liek me to write, which I gladly will contact me via AIM (MajinTobias4474)
Good luck buddy. Nice first try.