This was awesome.
To be honest, I was about to blam it. I swear. But then I kep watching. the highpoint of the movie is when he escapes prison, afterwards the movie gets kinda boring. Graphics could improve, but it was very smooth. Also, you were one of the few that can do special effects with your voice. It added a comedic effect to the movie. The plot wasnt that interesting, because you did not animate what happened before.
This was a very good movie. Overall 8.
actually... better than i thought it would be
Try not to make all your own sounds though... like the car
Laughs out loud
First of all I must say this harks back to the old days of newgrounds(back when I wasnt even a lurker really) before your Vartans and Clams. I actully like stick figure movies, allright, some are crap, but so is most of the stuff in the portal. This is down the middle of the road, with better drawings, you could have a popular series here.
Graphics: Sticks, its hard to draw sticks badly, but all I'd say is to tighten up on the lines, try using the line tool.
Sound: HAHHAHAHA!! I love it! I was pissing myself on the chase scene, dont change a thing here, youve got talent:) Even the gun sounds were good.
Style: Well, you are new to flash, so stick figures are the way to go, at least its different to sprites newbies usually use.
Violence: Quite alot, but I had to take points off for the blood...its terrible(even worse then my spelling). If you make one change between ths and the sequel, fix the blood, theres a lot of good tutorials around you can use.
Interactivity/Humour: No real interactivity, so nothing there. I did find it fairly funny I have to admit....even if it was only the sounds.
So overall, you show good potential and I hope you'll spend a little more time refining the second one.
Thanks for the amzing good reviews it really helped.. cheers dude
Sound Effects for Awesome
I do have one complaint - the intro is so long, boring and sucky that I almost turned it off. Even the pictures at the beginning were of poor quality.
...but the sound effects. I laughed at each new one. Hoorah!
you defiantly got some skills with flash
but this was yet another typical flash movie. and another note your choice of color in the main stick figure was poorly thought out . A young black stick figure in prison.... yeah someone gonna have a hissy fit bout that. Just keep practing and getting better and maybe stay away from the stick movies