uhh...
I liked it even though i didnt even know what was supposed to happen
Reviews for "AOTO ep. 1A"
DossMan01 responds:
dont worry things will make sence just give this series a chance and you'll understand.
thanks for the review.
((( OK )))
Hmm it is ok so far, i like animations in this the most you are good are drawing some original characters. The idea here you have is good, and i like what i have seen so far, you are good at animating, and the music you have to go with this is good too...
Maybe next time you could add some voices, but it is nice so far...
~X~
DossMan01 responds:
thank you
and I will keep that in mind
A few things
I think that the setup and story so far is genius. However, the drawings of people looked a little rigid and with no curves. That really annoyed me thruout the whole thing. The city looked like a bunch of squares that were lined up in some sort of order with a sidewalk. There were no streetlights, signs, or people walking around. Lastly, your switching from brush to line all the time messed with the whole thing. Like you couldn't decide what to use. I suggest sticking to one or the other from now on. Oh, and that whole thing where the song pops out of nowhere when the guy is being blasted to death was out of place and took the mood away. It made the guy's death need less climactic and it went to other scenes where it was also out of place.
not bad
the only flaw i saw was the lame looking city thing at the end the rest is good.
Looking forward to the series
DossMan01 responds:
thank you
I will keep that in mind for future reference
hmm..
Well it's pretty random..I mean a cave in a park it seems. And some of the drawings are all squared add some voices then it should be better. Nice try though.
DossMan01 responds:
no no no no no
the cave and the city are two completely different locations.
i'm sorry if I didnt make that clear.