Pretty good
Im usually not into the serious movies but i thout it was good keep it up :)
Reviews for "Velocity"
WOW this was amazing
I absolutely loved how u left the graph paper in the background, i felt that it was the perfect touch to help with depth. Your animation style is smooth and crisp. Hands down I loved it. I would have just liked to hear what the man and his daughter were talking about. Also a question for you. What was the swing attached too hahah... it looked like just the seat, there were no chains or ropes. But still this was an amazing piece of art. Keep up the amazing work :)
original and interesting
I really like the style of this movie. It feels really traditional and not just because of the black and white colors, but because of the way you drew the characters also. They have the same sort of look as the characters you see in the instruction manuals of DIY material or safety guides in airplanes.
The entire idea of the thing was captivating also. I like how the main character is in all the stress at start in the hostile skies and then how the animation took a really slow and peaceful turn towards the ending. Looks like you wanted to show how beloved ones can help us carry on in the most difficult of times. You also paid enough attention to the key scenes, like when the man grabbed his cellphone in the air and the transition between the hostile land and his home. A nice detail was the scene of the bird feeding her child. Id like to think that as a metaphor for the situation of the father and his daughter.
Some things werent drawn as good as others though. As said, the characters were all drawn and animated very well. Same goes for the tree and home environment. But things like the clouds and explosions really need dramtical improvement. I think the explosions would have looked better without the black outlines and the clouds if they were more transparant.
All in all, very well done animation. A really cool short story that manages to surpass the general serious flash here on NG in both concept and execution. Keep up the good work and I am going to watch your other animations right now!
AITD
Nice Work
Great images: the girl on the swing in particular. Now get back to work.
Good
8/10
The overall performance was long and a bit draggy.
I'm sure the feelings of this animation could've been expressed without so much long transitions. It was however decently animated. And I was building up some tension as he was parachuting and talking to his daughter. What if he got shot out of the sky!