I got a short chuckle out of the black eye...
but that was about it, kind of lame dude. Nice graphics though, just get funnier writers. You look like you have potential, the script was what knocked you though.
Reviews for "The Chadwicks: Episode 1"
Just the usual
Like we haven't seen that type of stuff a thousand and one times before...I'm sorry. "Hilarity ensures" is false advertisement on this page, and you should take it off. This isn't really front-page stuff, that's why it's getting lower ratings.
Not too bad I guess...
I was actually really excited during the loading screen, and was looking forward to a fifties satire....but then i watched the movie :( I can see where you were going with this and there were a few spots that worked, and I did find myself chuckle out loud. But as a whole the movie just didn't work. You need to work on your pacing most of all. There were so many points where I was just waiting for the character to say their lines and there would be a 2 second beat before they actually delivered. Also the ending was very slugish. You have a cool style though, and I would keep at it. Another thing to consider is sound...there was no flow. Sound effects sounded like they were literally dragged and dropped over top of the movie and really made for a poor experience sound wise. You do have lots of potential though, just keep practicing!
Hated it
Why be so sexist? it is not funny anymore as should have never been. This flash would have earned more without the whole male dominance aspect. Woman should not be even referred to as slaves as this cartoon demonstrated, because believ it or not... they can do more than we can... Now where is the dominance?
Next time one of your cartoons show that sort of behavior... I am going to blam it... perhaps I cannot do it alone, but its a progressive effort.
as on the other hand... if your next flash does redeem some funny clean points without violence to opposing sex, without racism or anything of the likes... you may earn yourself a 9/10
Better luck next time
Not particularly great...
Graphics and sound were good. The plot was...interesting...but definitely not funny... I didn't laugh let alone crack a smile throughout the entire thing. One suggestion (besides imporiving the humor), when in profile Chadwick's left (and sometimes right) pupil protrudes from his eye, making it look sort of like a zit or something...which kinda bothered me. ^_^;;