Wow
havn't seen stuff like this since simple line 7. This was a great submission (tryin to make one myself :p) but there were a few flaws I found - when you did some of the lines, they were very VERY squiggly that made them look too roughly drawn...try to smooth them out. and second - the action in it was a bit slow paced. Speed it up and it would give a watcher much more incentive to keep on watching. Great anyways!
Lacked Style
Music was awesome. Graphics were well made, but it lacks style overall. It seemed more like a doodle than a clip or a short film.
plain
i can see that alot of effort was put into this, but it was really alittle too plain. Hope to see something better than just lines boxes apearing then dissapearing without any meaning. Still, props to your effort. You deserved it.
nice work.
Great use of those shapes and stuff LOL. Looks like you did some actual Work on it too. Needs a bit mroe to it tho .i mean ..."Just shapes and Lines" i feel like im on an ACID tripin Geometry class when i watched this. Awsome non the less. Just needs something. GL finding out what.
ah yes
A good and pointless flash. All these flashes now a days have to have stuff like "A plot" and "Meaning".