Well...
It's your first movie so the animation can be excused. But seriously you have lots of room for improvment. Keep at it Badegg.
Reviews for "I Clock to Danger"
Not bad
it could have been better, but i dont think this should be blammed
HEH HEH HEH
lol kinda funny
hello newbie. i hate straberry clock. (just him not the others)
nice movie!
Hm
Well you DEFINATELY need to make your speakonia voices faster, they are way too slow.
Working on the animation will help too, the way the characters moved was somewhat awkward.
I like how you put breadfruit clock in there, but instead of drawing your own (some of which did not look so good), find some already made flash files of clocks to use in your movies.
As for scripts, the story in this one was decent but it could use a little work. The dot dot dot part actually made me chuckle though.
Good start
I really wanted to dislike this but the silly cameral angles joke made me laugh. this is a basic flash but with more work there's room for improvement. :-))