Reviews for The Useless MuleReUpdated

[Roger-wilco]

Ok, Time for review number 2.

Adding in some sun rays and a few new frames for the fire DOES NOT make the jokes any funnier.

notes:
-The '1st grade feel' just comes off as bad flash. Not fun to look at.
-The animation is too slow, a 6 second joke takes about 20.
-The jokes are not funny, why would you spend time making a flash from a 1st grade story?? Why not write something new that doesn't have 1st grade humor?
-YOU DIDNT CHANGE THE MUSIC! you said you made the mucic a really short loop to 'cut down file size'. OBVIOUS: We would rather spend 5 seconds loading than listen to a 10 second clip repeat for 5 minutes. The sound LITERALLY annoys us, why would you put something into a flash if you know it will annoy us?? we dont want to be annoyed!

Scrap it, make something new.

[Yuzoen0]

I guess it is 1st grade quality...

Not too great but not too bad either on this flash. Not to be offensive or anything but it seemed not to be worth of my time as the sound (excluding the backround music) was poor quality (i.e. hitting the tree, fire, etc.) and there was no interesting storyline whatsoever, but it's worth the try I guess. Not a bad idea on making a flash based on your 1st grade stuff but could still use improvement overall.

[Shaunbeale]

Its not funny!

Its not funny!

[Uber-Teufel]

Excellent.

Agreed...I don't like how the music cuts out. I do, however, love the idea of turning a story from 1st grade into flash...I have like 10 of those somewhere that I need to find now. Good work.

noob-B-oy responds:

I'm glad somebody finally gets the point of all this. I just got struck with an inspirational idea. I'm happy that I inspired you too :)

[Pi-Roh]

Good Start

This was a good start, but next time make more movement and draw your main figures as good as you do your background. Milton looked pretty bad compared to the pretty good backgrounds you had. The drum beats got pretty repetitive and next time... don't spell one of your words wrong in a completely written dialog. it should be "too" instead of "to" in the last sentence.

noob-B-oy responds:

Thanks for the advice, I really do appreciate it. The to was intentional. And all other spelling and grammar errors. I copied the original story exactly.