Good effort
Yo dawg, sorry bout all this. It is sad, but you have to realize how lucky you are. For example, you have an education? Family is alive? Shelter? Food?. There are people in the world who don't have these. So with the energy you are spending on this, hell, you could maybe make a difference in the world. I don't mean to be insensitive or anything, but just thought I'd say.
On the flash animation side of the review, you got some talent. The only thing I'd like to say is that you should have used more animation than text.
Overall, good effort, obviously you can channel your emotions well into a flash work. Try something new.
Good luck,
-Mr. Cookie