ermm...
Was there a stoery line at all?
boat sinks, he dies, he runs, he falls, 10 hours later gets a sword....
I dont get it.
animation was alright sept your framing was a little off. also when he was shaking after the 10 hours he legs seperated from themselves and it looked bad ... Just refine and tweek and i think iwould be decent
Its the screen size you set up
the screen size is bigger than your movie so the white background shows up. solution make the screen size fit the size of your movie or make your movie bigger
try harder
I have to say, i'm sorry, because this was just crap. you never really knew what was going on, and the drawing were very confusing. I have seen better come from my brother, a four-year old. In fact, the end animation was WAY better than this. Try using that style when making your next movie.
you should know better
than to submit a flash like this to newgrounds
it made no sense at all but at least you put some
effort into to it...............i think
Blam this piece of crap!..
Nice idea...not..
Try and get a proper storyline, and learn how to animate. You might want to actually do some of that, instead of just making one or two different pictures and tweening them repeatedly...
Mess around with flash ALOT more before submitting, please.