Good for a first flash, but clique.
This was good for a first attempt, but remember: there are a lot of flashes of just battle on Newgrounds. I know personally I'm kind of sick of seeing them. Similarly, there are many flashes with Mario themes or music. These two things turned me off your flash a bit, but if you continue I think you have some great potential. Keep trying!
aye i agree, i think partly thats beacause battles are the easiest to do. Which is why i choose to do one for my first =) thx for the review
Not Bad
Not bad for your first flash. Looked smooth. Window size was a little irritating but nothing major. Good job.
Man!
for a first flash you are starting high! thats whay I have got to give you a...
B R O C C O L I!!! keep up the good work! (I got my eye on ya!)
wow, a broccoli! jeeze what more could i ask for. Im ready to pass away now.
Not bad
Especially for a first movie. Sprites usually suck, but you managed to do some good things with them. I would have made a background. Not bad, though. Keep up the good work.
sorry man
Its a good first flash...but it just can't pass judgement. try to make the movie a normal size and maybe have a little more than sprites on a white Backround. but seriously that is better than what i can do with Flash MX. (I'm too lazy to read any of those tutorials...they just make me more confused...I would be less confused it they wrote it in freaking spanish!)