Good idea, but work on it
Your animation is smooth and you have an interesting idea, but your speed-sketch figures make some of it hard to follow. You have potential, but practice a bit more.
Good idea, but work on it
Your animation is smooth and you have an interesting idea, but your speed-sketch figures make some of it hard to follow. You have potential, but practice a bit more.
youve got potential
This isnt the best flash out there, but you have the potential to make it up there. The graphics are well drawn with an interesting style and you chose the right kind of music. With more practice you could make your name known.
cool
yeh cool, i like the style of this animation :D
hmm....
i've seen worse, but it could definitly use some work, especially on stuff like the colouring
well...
Don't just give up. Finish it when u get better.