Pretty Good...
That wasn't too bad. As a Starcraft player, I even found it funny at times. It would have been nice if you had had more of a linear plot and had eliminated some of the randoim stuff in favor of more Starcraft jokes. Like the pizza guy didn't do it for me, while the SCV and probe mission was pretty funny. Good stuff, though, I'd like to see what you do with a little more experience under your wings.