i dont really like runescape, but its alright
yeah, runescape isn't really the coolest thing in my book, but i disregarded that. your flash skill is pretty good, but there's still some key things to work on.
Reviews for "RSAdvance: Part 1"
Syrsly responds:
Maybe you could point out specific things you think need improvement? I know some bits of the first scene are pretty doodle-ish, but I improved the quality of the animation as the movie progressed, so expect less doodle-ish drawings as I make the rest of the series.
this stepable one
this animation is good but you must whereupon aser something better
Syrsly responds:
...talk (type) in plain english or I may not understand you....
Was OK
Graphics-Nice drawing
Style-Alright
Sound-Sometimes good sometimes bad
Violence-Making a bit less would be good
Interactivity-None
Humour-Some parts are funny
Overall 7 If you would have finished it before submiting it, I would have gave you a 8. Next time make a complete work before submiting it.
Syrsly responds:
It was complete... Each scene was originally on its own movie file. I then decided to try fitting more into one swf. I also don't think it matters if it's complete or not. You should like it just as much.
((( IT WAS OK )))
You have good animations, and your a really good drawer, but you have not many backgrounds, and those are important for this kind of animation, i like the sound but some music is just not my kinda music. The menu, and control panel is nice, but you should not have added scene 3 if there is no scene 3, but good effort so far...
~X~
Syrsly responds:
The scene 3 thing is just so people know there are more to come.
Meh.
It's ok. But it would be cool a RS for gameboy advance.
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