well...
my friend actualy did sumthin callled "worms shorts" and quite a few, and yours was somewhat similar. I did score high because it looked like u made those graphics urself and dint just rip em off sum site, so i give u credit for that....um...make more flash movies kos u'll get better.
biased
Bit biased wasnt it seein as ur scottish, ok flash otherwise tho
PErsonally
I hated it, the graphics were disgusting, you didnt even follow worms rules, and you probably nuked this one up before bedtime. The only thing you can do to fix this series is to end it. Sorry, but thats how I feel.
Pre-Loader???
I am pretty sure that your flash didn't have a preloader, its a good attempt but it wasn't really exciting. and also try some new voices cuz i noticed that you and the worms on the frontpage had one of the worms voice that was similar
(sigh)
i acidentally voted this one too high, i didn't like it very much i'm afriad