good
though i cant too harsh, i have to say it is nice. not great, not cool, but nice, keep it up.i givethis one a C+
Reviews for "Halo - The Final Battle"
Good work.
Hey man, I understand how hard it is to use flash. I downloaded the trial version of flash MX 2005, and two days of hard work came out as total crap. I see that you're only 13, which is cool. I'm only 15...Anyhoo, good work. Work on your graphics, sprites don't show any real graphic talent. Maybe do some voice actors while you're at it.
kinda shaky
OMFG! The screen was really shaky. It made it difficult to read. The hunter and MC die to easily. Otherwise, great flash, as everyone knows, Halo is like the best game ever. cant wait for more episodes.
nFiniteEcho responds:
ya ill figure out how to fix shakeyness.
Ow...
I love Halo...but that was just bad...Was that really supposed to be Lockout? There's only about 3 or four Spartan IIs left. John is his name, not Master Chief. But the military doesn't go by a first-name basis. He achieved the rank of Master Chief because of his superior leadership. You don't just become one. Hunters can't die by a sniper shot to the face (Good lord knows I've tried) In summary...read the books..play Lockout a few more times..Then come back and make a flash..please.
nFiniteEcho responds:
if you go to the sniper tower in lockout then look up above the purple mover up thingy you will see where they are coming from.
Good sprites and animation, bad movie.
Positives:
-Great job with the sprites and animations
-Decent audio
Negatives:
-Pretty bad story, characters, and backgrounds, etc.... IE you could have done a good job if you had a half decent story
-Inaccuracy with the Halo universe, Master Chief is a rank, only one spartan reached that rank, his nickname was John and his number was 117, not every spartan was called Master Chief and all the numbers you used for your spartans are dead already according to the Halo storyline (this isn't why you got marked down, I am just pointing it out)
P.S. The Halo name does not make something instantly good.
nFiniteEcho responds:
Quote "P.S. The Halo name does not make something instantly good."
Its just like "you cant judge a book by its cover". and i know its not good, its MY BEST that ive made so far.