Sweet.
This was good, but could've been alot. Like you said, 0:00-0:12 is quite odd, but it's quite the same as the middle riff? 0:14-0:20 couldn't have been any better.
It also got a bit repetitive.
Short, but hopefully helpful.
Rev'd
Reviews for "Soar Away"
S'alright
It's not bad, but some of the note/chord progressions in the are kind of weak and a little jarring.
lol
Gross beat is cool. But a 1/4th on the bassline just makes it too wishy washy. Try a 1/2 or maybe a saw pattern.
Good melody, its an 8:8 time, but the first 4:8 bars are basically stolen from Alphavilles Forever Young, i think. Maybe its What is Love by Haddaway. Anyways, its very familiar.
Ummm
Why does the WHOLE song sound like a sequence in FL?
Very, if not too, simple. Its like 4 notes of random sequences.
Be original.