Well...
It's ok though. Try to lengthen the movie and it will be just fine. Nice 1st flash dude. Keep it up. Cheers for the effort.
Reviews for "THE ENDING (part1)"
firecrackerboom088 responds:
I am working on part2 right now, the song gets more intense, as does his encounters... the story will unfold nicely i think.
ok
it's ironic that it's called "the ending part one" dont you think? whatever looks good.
firecrackerboom088 responds:
well the story is really about the ending for the guy in the trench: michael. Its about his last 4 minutes in life. Its told in parts, see?