your rite
your right, this is crap. Ill give you credit cause you actually made me laugh with your banana guts lol. Graphics and style pathetic.
your rite
your right, this is crap. Ill give you credit cause you actually made me laugh with your banana guts lol. Graphics and style pathetic.
fair
i'm not a fan of the genre,,, any longer,,, but you used the personages wellish,, the film on total was nicely put together if a little jerky,,, but a whole movie none the less. And i liked your ickle message. fair
Its not that bad.
I dont really get the whole "locks n clocks" thing...but i enjoyed this, lots of unexpected shootings, :P..... do another one without the "text to speech" and "clocks and locks" and youll be getting a 4 or 5 from me :)
not bad not bad
this really isnt bad at all! I liked it. soudn effects (not the voices) were kinda choppy but all in all good work. and your english seems fine
Thanks
Wow why did you diss your own submission?
It didn't have any grammar mistakes.
Yes? many people say it does.
"the banana locks could be anywhere"
is it a right sentence?