really nice
kinda reminded me of sin city a bit, and i loved that movie. i see what the other guy ment about the lipstick, his lips were a little dark and it did look awkward. the animation is good for what u have. its like a comic book. there really isnt too much movement, i think it gives it character. you get a 4, would of been a five if it was longer. hope u make the rest fo the series
Cool
Its kinda vague on the details.....but u said it would expand....also nice shadowing effects but jonny's lips looked like they had lipstick on.....im sure u didnt intend it to look that way but it still did to me
a pack of smokes lasts you 4 days?
if you smoke like how your character does then those 20 cigs are gonna kill you, he was smoking backwards, lighting the filter. looks like someone has the 'cigarettes make me cool' mindframe, heh. good flash tho
Sweet
Would have been cooler if it were longer, but I did like the graphic novel type animation. Good work overall.
it was interesting
if it was longer, this would be alot better.