that was VERY good
the only problem was you couldnt understand the story and you didnt know what was happening
that was VERY good
the only problem was you couldnt understand the story and you didnt know what was happening
good art but that sucked
SUCKED ya that fits it SUCKEDdddddddddddd its so fun to say sucked, but good art
johnny boy
wow man, really original title, i can tell you're a fan of sin city. animation was alright, but there wasn't really enough of it. i could think of a better concept in about 5 seconds though. i think if you want people to know the whole story, you really need to make more episodes. you are a talented animator, but without any more plot development, this flash sucks.
wtf?
your not bad at animating, but c'mon now...
unless you've read this comic and know this story, dont bother with this..
In the words of Julie Andrews:
"Let's start at the beginning... It's a very good place to start..." X(~
I'm sick of people who can't think of a good plot and/or are too lazy to make a flash that INCLUDES the plot they DID think of, and cut right to the pornography in order to get front page or whatever accolades.
CHARACTERS make the narrative, characters and the ability of the audience to IDENTIFY with the motives and feelings of said characters. And uh, you have none. In fact, two of the three possibilities are dead. And the other isn't looking too promising.