i thought it was a pink pizza?!
it shouldnt have ended so abruptly.. the music was pretty cool if you designed it yourself. i was thinking if you wanted to make more music you could use more simple design to go with it while you practice flash. like those cool coloured vibrating line things they used to make in the 70's to go with music.
constructive criticism exists so you can improve..
on poor animations like this. i understand dreams make little sense, so in a way this works quite well. But it was impossible to figure out what anything was, spend a bit longer on the artwork?
Kinda meh...
It was kinda stupid. The sound was good and all that, but the graphics weren't anything special, and it was really short. And although you based off a dream or whatever, that doesn't make random crap good. It would have been better if you'd made inspired by a dream you had instead of a transcription of random shit that you remember.
Erm..
that was certainly a strange dream you had there. I dunno what this was all about but hey, who cares. Nice try, better luck next time.
I hope you sleep better now.
Piss poor....
That was shit, seriously u left loads of crappy gaps in everythign the continuity of your drawing was awful. Also, dont submit stuff if u know it's shit ok.