the sound was what killed it for me
not to mention that the "jokes" suck ass. animation was pretty good did you see revege of the sith you could have shown him burning up.
Reviews for "StarWarsAFP: Part 1 Act 1"
silentmike86 responds:
it will come my friend, it will come, part 4
not funny
it wasnt funny, the voice acting was horrible, and the jokes weren't funny at all. I didnt know you could mess up on vader's breathing but you did.
silentmike86 responds:
where theres a will theres a way, some day you will learn too :)
Ok
An ok Star Wars parody, but had many bad points.
silentmike86 responds:
er...thanks
Cliche
Every single star wars joke cliche was included. That means a lack of original thought but still. To use every single one in a single fell swoop is a very humorous accomplishment.
silentmike86 responds:
Thank you, it was a mission of mine to spoof every star wars movie in this cartoon, so there will be more in the next 3 parts.
I have a 100% original idea in the works (its to do with my logo) but I wont be starting on it till I finish star wars, I do want to move on from parody’s once I get good enough. I’ve improved a great deal since the trailer but I’m still not there yet.
I am however going to make sure part 2 is allot better animated.
Luke, Give It A 5!
IMHO, this was hysterical. The whole thing with your security card cracked me up. The only suggestion I have is to make the voices a little clearer and....OH GOD, HOLY PULSATING PLAYSTATIONS, WERE ALL GONNA DIE!!!
silentmike86 responds:
I Like This Review :)
Interestingly enough, the clearance card thing is based on real life, happens to me a college now and them lol