This Could Use Some Work.
There's nothing really wrong with stick animation, if two things are present:
1) It needs to be something original, and
2) It needs to have a decent plot.
Unfortunately, this kind of thing has been done to death. Sticks fighting, The Matrix, sudden ending. I liked the zooming and stuff, but this needs more to be a standout flash. Try a more original idea. Your work is pretty smooth. Keep trying!
a little short.
Strengths: i was totally into the background audio theme! i guess it was the most appropriate considering your efforts to mimic the fighting stunts as depicted in the paramount presentation known as the Matrix.. hhehe. The style was there - the focus transitions were pretty well performed. Gave anticipation for the battle & excitement for the viewers...
Weaknesses: its hard for stick movies to perform generally well when the fighting techniques these stick characters employ are relatively simple.. a storyline would go quite nicely to this flash presentation as well - something other than the matrix perhaps... like an agent? make it lengthier & you want to add more depth & detail into scenes that portray heavy violence as well - Overall, keep at it
- HighDef.
Not bad, as far as stick figure movies go.
It's a stick figure movie. I'm willing to accept that. :D There's some style and creativity in it, specifically in where you choose to focus. Many a stick figure movie always has the fight scene right. in. the. center. all the time.
Ultimately: good work so far, keep it up.
Not bad, but not great
Nicely done, but the rating 2 - "Nothing too new or interesting" fits it perfectly. I mean, as far as stick fights go I've seen worse, but it's not innovative or interesting really, just same old, same old.
The Matrix is over
I really wish people would give up on the mAtrix already and let it die...