thoughts
I liked this!
Just a suggestion...
You could modify the part when the flash is in public judgement (blam/protect). Maybe add a bit with different people exacting judgement while it's on the conveyor belt (e.g. People standing there with various weapons bludgeoning the flash (BLAMs) & a couple people hand it flowers, kisses, candy, shields, etc (protecting it). That way by the end the bad flash has taken a beating and looks like the animation in the Obits section. (or the good flash makes it out with nothing but a black eye or bandaid) I'm sure you get the picture. ;)