lol
that was funny!
Love it.
Reviews for "Strawberry goes to Hotel"
HydraulicCat responds:
thx
Hm, not bad I guess
Needs inprovement! Like, a better plot perhaps, i'm not usually the one that needs a plot in a flash, but it would be good if there was some kind of reason why they had to go to the hotel, where they running away from someone? Where they planning to do something in wherever place they went? Or were they just going on holiday? ^^ But yes, graphics were pretty good. It was funny when he shot the guy who was going to ring the police, then the cops said something through the phone and StrawberryClock shot the phone ;P
HydraulicCat responds:
Thx, my movies have bad storyline
the best of my clock movies is
dynamite clock show, the storyline
is by my mother.
It felt a little out of place
Strwberryclock's voice was too high, and there was little plot going on even thoguh it's a short. There were some funny moments, but the story was a bit "static". The animation was nice though, and the sound effects are nice and clear too. Those are some highpoints. If you just added in a better plot, this would have got something like a 9 out of 10. Good job though.
not so bad
well, i kinda liked this one but all the other movies sucked... but this is good
Hmn?
A very strange combination of great drawing and animation and horrible story!
To make a short story a little longer and more tedeious = The animation was great, but the storyline was very lacking and to make things a bit worse, the way the animator had used the speaking program was just horrible. :/
Sure, there where some good points, but I cant give it to much. And actually, I think I've spent to long writing this review ;)
Well. There is alot of room for improvement and I think the author will improve a ton further on...
B!