very good
I just wish you'd put in some music! It would really help with the flow, filling out the spaces between your character noises. Like shopping muzak etc. You had some at the end, I know, but just more in general.
It was gooood stuff though. Very slick.
ew
all i have to say is "ew"...the drawings were bad, the story stunk and it was just plain bad in my opinion
Nice layout and style.
LOL. Good luck on your future works.
WOW
wow that was really really really really really random shit right there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What a random story!
A guy who goes shopping, then runs into a wanted criminal, finds a duck, and then a car chase! I don't think I've seen a story more random than this!
Tell me, did that movie get an A?