Not bad.
I hope the final movie will be good. You should have added some gun sounds and voices in the trailer though. The graphics were all right, but you can still work on them.
Reviews for "Wanted (Teaser)"
soutafrica340 responds:
Actually, the style of this flash is no sound, no voices, just music. The whole song is 4:35, so it'll make for a pretty sickly long flash. I suggest you get it.
Could be better
If you spent more time on this it could be cool. it was like 5 seconds and had no point. nice try but take more time on the animation.
Could have been alot better
I mean, it wasnt very interesting, with the whole racing car, shoot em' up plot...its unorigional...and within the year, if this becomes an actual flash, try to improve the graphics, and possible have an alternative plot.
hmm not sure this is really a teaser
i understand that flash animations take a long time to create when they are done well, however the point of a teaser is to grab the viewers attention. i think you should have created a more flashy better animated flash. even flash teasers that are only like 20 secs long can be more effective when done really well.
Not bad
Passes my standard and your lucky i dont vote 1,2,3 or 4 only 0-5
so.....how to improve...Mainly your graphics and real physics.
E.g the guy turning round in car...you cant do that you can have 1 doing the driving..improve on graphics and make the actual movie long and you got yourself a good flash.
What i could see the story was quite good. Good Luck!