good
good sprite and u got some funny stuff here next time make it longer and funnier i'm giving u a 5 and i'm lvl7
Reviews for "FFI: Dawn of Idiots"
MouthWindow responds:
kk
You need some more practice
It wasn't really what I would call "crap", but it wasn't really a good movie either. It was somewhere in between, a bit more on the crappy side maybe. Well at least it has some effort putten into it, better than all those crappy movies with no effort at all. Anyway, like I said the movies were not that good.
First, they were very short. Even watching the whole movie takes less than a minute. You should make them a bit longer and with a better storyline. You could start with the beginning, give a reason why Fighter killed himself for example. Second, the extra's were not that special. I mean it were just some sprites that I could watch, nothing really interesting. Well it were just extra's I guess,
say why don't you make a second movie with those sprites? I really like Final Fantasy VIII. Third, ur... were was the bonus material? Was that the last scene or what? I couldn't discover any bonus. Fourth, the graphics could use a little improvement here and there. Fifth, you should make a different text-style (I hope you know what I mean), sometimes it was a bit hard to read and in the second part, the text went a bit too fast.
Well the best thing about this movie was the music in my opinion, very good that you added that. Most movies without backgroundmusic are boring.
Anyway, overall I'd give this 5 out of 10. It wasn't bad for one of your first submissions, practice a little bit more and you might make a pretty good movie in the future. Good luck with any flashes you were going to make.
~Auz
MouthWindow responds:
Ok, i am updating the flash right now, ill make a pre-lude to why fighter killed himself, also, if have ever played Final Fantasy 1 though, there is a boss called Marilith, its the four armed thing that spins around on the main menu, (its red) click it and be "treated" ¬¬ to a small fbf short
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good use of the video game dudes, but you need to work on the humor a little bit
MouthWindow responds:
ok, i will, this flash is about a year old anyway, i found it on my computer yesterday, so i decided to make it look better
pointless
this was pretty much pointless
later
signed da-wiglet
MouthWindow responds:
well, thanks for the review
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not so good....
MouthWindow responds:
Well, thanks for the reveiw