Hmm...
shows potential, but for a 'trailer' as such, you should have put more action in it. that showed nothing of what is to come.
Hmm...
shows potential, but for a 'trailer' as such, you should have put more action in it. that showed nothing of what is to come.
yeah
you better make this so called messiah thing other wise you be like all those other idiots who come out talking big and turns out your to lazy to get anything done and every one hates you
Heh...
I'm not going to vote on this one due to it's conflicting nature to my personal agenda, I just thought I'd review it. To be frank, it was terrible, not because of what I know but because of the overall quality of the flash. Too short, too ugly, my friend...even if it is a background story for later episodes, which I will watch with 'delight,' more or less, it wasn't on par with other submissions. Oh, and to the moron who voted 5 because you incorporate 'G-D' into your flash...if I know where this series is going, and I believe I do, I beg you to keep watching. Peace.
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A description of a yet to come story that is REALLY dull. The story seems interesting and dark, but this chapter is just uneeded. YOu stare at a tree in day and night that got really dull... MORE ACTION!
waste of time
watching this makes me feel like i heard this ina movie before and the tree sure symbolism is cool and all but you didnt really do much character or plot building kinda just a prophesized peice of crap.
and in the authors notes i think you knew it was because your already telling us about the next installment hopefully you just add it to this one and save space on the portal