ok, but it could have been better...
I thought that was well done. Cool use of sprites and old nintendo games! The story could have been developed more so that Mega-Man was not just passing through some old game backgrounds, but there was actually something to do in each one (other than jumping around... ok, he did have to kill those crab thingies).
Drop the swearing too... it's pointless.
But, I do think you have a great foundation to something that could be really really good and entertaining.