Another amazing techno piece with that sci-fi element and thats what I really like from these pieces here some awsome sound indeed so keep doing what you do
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Reviews for "[39] Keep On Going [39]"
Good, but the voice...
If you would have some (good) female vocals in there instead of that robot voice, it would be better. I would give the song itself an 8, but the voice is just too annoying.
flight39 responds:
Ah well. I was just stepping out into music when I made this. Somehow my earliest tracks keep making it onto the Best Tracks Ever category, when the latest ones, which are the ones I really want to promote, never get noticed.
That this song is incredibly generic I don't doubt, and I agree with you that female vocals would make it better. However, this song has been up too long to change, and I can't quite make myself better in April, no? :P
I've made some better songs since. Plan One, Break Free (only version 2) and Number Twelve (demo so far) are all better in my opinion, and I'm sure you'd find at least one of them good.
Thanks for the review,
flight39
I can see where you're headed...
I like the background, but the void needs work. It's a great idea - but the I really wish it came out smoother, a bit louder, and that the sound level was consistent. As it is, if fades in and out, which is kinda annoying, and it spikes a little harshly on some syllables. Fix that up, and it will be pretty solid.
The filler in between lyrics could be a bit more exciting as well. Perhaps another loop or two in between parts?
flight39 responds:
Yeah. The voice definitely needs work. In this song, I didn't understand vocoders as much as I do now, and since I had just started making even acceptable music in January, I can say that this song is kinda boring.
It doesn't help that I'm doing the recordings with a headset mic on an incredibly slow comp with plenty of latency, but that's a question of money, which I can't really fix. That the voice fades in and out and spikes? I didn't really know how to normalize back then, which probably would have done me some good.
I'm at least pretty sure I'm better at things now, which begs the question of why my earlier tracks keep appearing on Best Tracks Ever and my later, better ones don't. I think some of my songs, like my latest one, Number Twelve, or Break Free version 2, or Plan One, you'd like better.
Thanks for the feedback,
flight39