Hum..
I don't get it.. I don't understand this track..
I don't even see how it's trance..
the variation you put in the final minute was not bad, but way not enough,
You should work on it, and boost it a little.
I prefer a 100 time your ''Arcana'' demo track,
that demo only deserve at least a 9 !
But this present track needs more working, keep it up,
And please finish your Arcana track, :) It can't be left unfinished like taht !
lat'.
wooooooooooo
you put your feelings in that track. thats the best thing one can do with a song. full score and one more download!
protract it, make a 10min-mix and pm me!
5/5 // 10/10
Like communication to your soul through sound
great song, it sounds very beautiful =)
5/5 plus fave
Astonishing...
This is excellent--and yet it has the potential to become incredible. It seems like it should build to some sort of climax--at about 2:00 seems like a perfect spot to just -build-, at least for a minute or two (instead of restarting the beat at 2:40-ish.) After those couple of minutes, the melody should sweep the listener into a radiant joy, supported a strong low end (probably along the lines of DjUntold's review.) After that, let the song glide back down, and pick up with the rest of what you have from 2:40 onward. 3:08 to the end is simply beautiful--I would go so far as to say that it's perfect.
Sorry I can't provide more technical help to back up my thoughts--I'm more a musician than a composer. :P I'm sure if you ask anyone with experience in this area on Newgrounds they'll gladly help you out. :D
Ok man
Nice melody rather soft not enough powe for me. Still i don t think that was your aim in the first place so I will forgive you heheh.
Okays! O: Thank you for reviewing my song! :3
I'm glad you liked it.