u need practiceeee :P
practice drawing the same chracter from different angles, cuz just that the hair is the same, doesnt really make the same character from different angles, my point is, the orange hair girl looks different when she looks up, etc....., work on it and u'll get use to the character. ummm another thing, the sword she was holding was too small it looked more like a stick..... long stick...... but hey i liked the castle..... but i hate the accent that the dude had...........