NOOOOOO!!!
oh em ef gee Oh you little prick bastard. You had me totally wrapped up in the story and then you leave me with a hook right in my EYE! But MAN if the pain isn't worth it. Geez you have some REAL good story talent here. You don't seem to need very much of anything left here but PUUULEEEEEEZ! Get part du out ASAP you have me itching my brain like a crack fiend.
Viewtiful, Indeed
Much praise. Very well done, especially for flash. Though there are slight problems, it is completely fine. The only real problem I had, though, was that the overall presentation and mood just seemed too... egh... "Wannabe-anime" esque, though it's very passable and is completely excused. No real improvement I can recommened in written text, though, except that all improvements will make they're way over time, something that "comes naturally for all artists."
Damn straight.
viewtiful
most impressive. the art and animation were extremely high quality, choice of camera positioning was good too. the music worked well, and the voice acting work wasn't too shabby either. the storyline seems to be interesting, and I'll definitely be looking forward to another chapter. room for improvement? there's almost always room for some, but for you I think all you need is practice, patience, and time. something that comes naturally for all artists. keep up the good work.
GODDAM IT..........SUSPENSE!@!@#!@#!@#
im waiting for the sequel is much as iv been wating for star wars 3, plz it quick =D
oh boy. I see a sequel coming.
Wow. That was a great flash even though it had a few flaws. That camera stuff you did must have been a lot of work. I can't help notice that ken looked kinda like duo from gundam wing. The boss looked kinda like referee mario from punchout. When his father died seven days later, did the seven days part have a significant part to the story? I'm sure the How to Draw Anime Girls flash tutorial will be awesome too.