Minor Graphics problems
First, very very very good for a first flash.
A few suggestions:
1. Throughout the flash, there were some pixilation problems with the objects in the movie. This was especially evident in the beginning, while the camera was zooming in and out on the characters
2. The introduction is waaaaay too long.
Thank you for mentioning that... I was at a loss as to how to get some particular images to be identical to one another, so I completely messed myself over when I was working by copy/pasting objects into Fireworks, magic-wand selecting the white background, and deleting things. The bitmaps that pixilate are actually vector images that I (for some reason or other that I have no clue about now) merged into a single flattened bitmap before importing to Flash... I won't make that mistake in the next episode, promise! :D
Damn Good
It was pretty godd, but damn good for a first flash project. i hope u make this into a series! ^_^
pretty good
i liked it keep up good work
Pretty Cool, dude!
Overall, good animating, man!...
But there are some pitfalls...
EG.
Change all of the bitmap images to vector.
Also, sometimes there is a white stripe along the left-hand edge.
This can be fixed by making the background bigger.
Bit i can see you will be making some cool stuff in the near future...
As for the intro... yeah, I agree, it's a bit long. Not much I can do about that now, though, I don't think.
The white bar is something I'm tempted to say was deliberate, just to cover up the fact that I majorly boobooed... heh. It didn't show up in the HTML file that Flash published for me, but yes - I can make that go away by stretching the background on all of it's umpteen keyframes that are there for almost no reason that I can remember... the layers and frames are all one big mess, this being my first project and all...
Thanks again!
it's ok
it was ok. i mean the graphics were old school and it was kind of like "angle".