Not enough bass
Not sure if its something you do when you master, but I think this needs a lot more bass. My ears may be playing tricks, but I think its seriously lacking in the low end, almost like you've been highpassing it when the dance beat starts.
Only suggestion. Can't wait until the final version comes out.
Excellent!
I'll give you a 10 when you finish this, but so far it's great XD
Interesting new stuff
I think that because of the natural beat of the original song, your usual style doesn't work well here. The song really wants to focus of the normal Evny beat, which is usually awesome, but because of the time signature of the song, it feels like it's straining to get away from the song the whole time. Not your fault at all, it just doesn't seem this song would work with your style. The only suggestion I could make is go with less Envy and more of the original somehow, but I'm not even sure if I know what that means :p
Good try, nonetheless. Keep it up.