Good Job, but.....
You said it was done without colour, yet I noticed some blue for the tear at the begining, please alter this or I shall threaten to sue you for false advertising!!
PS: liked it! :)
Reviews for "The Coach Journey"
[[[Not bad]]]
Mmmmm ok i can see the plot and what you were trying to get here which is more than i can say for most newgrounds entries.
Clean up the graphics a little and you will go a long way.
Flashmanbutnotgood
I liked it
I dont see why anyone would want to blam this, its amazing.
constructive criticism
the drawing is incredibly bad. i don't mean to discourage the artist. I just want you to improve, maybe you should take an electroniv imaging course or something.
eh
this is not good but it isnt crap either its just not well done