The animation speed was too slow
That looked like it would be a nice flash but the speed was really horrendously slow... or atleast it didn't line up with the dialog. Put up the FPS dial and you will have a nice flash!
Reviews for "A Mother's Day Short"
MrBrentoon responds:
I don't know, your comp might have lagged, mine seemed to be ok, but ok I'll take that into consideration
Mr.Brentoon
NO
Sorry dude but that sucked monkey balls major time. No offense or anything, I understand that moms might think its adorable and sweet that you made that, but thats something you show to your family,not to others on the web, sorry dude, but this isn't something you should submit to newgrounds. I don't have anything against your or your animating skills, this is just not the thing to be up on the internet.
MrBrentoon responds:
what I'm trying to do is show people that newgrounds is for people that want other people to see their emotions, and to stop(or minimize) the blood gore, and stupidness of some cartoons(not the nudity though(keep those coming))
a short lesson
Mom's: Possessive. "Mom's new handbag is really nice. I am going to steal cigarettes from it."
Moms: Plural. "Moms always have the nicest handbags. Usually they buy quality cigarettes, too."
Just thought you might like to know.
Other than that, it was pretty ok.
like the last guy said urgh......................
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MrBrentoon responds:
I don't know how to respond to that but I don't know what your computer is on.
WTF??
How did the file size end up so large??????????????? It was like 5 seconds long.
MrBrentoon responds:
I don't know how it got so large