Her abdomen is twisted wrong for the angle that her upper body is twisted. I recommend that you practice drawing real people for a bit, it might help you hone your fine detailing a bit- a bit is all that you need. (Don't worry if you don't copy exactly either, I can't draw what I see for crap, but this practice did help me out a great deal. Now if only I could figure out the copyright laws; I don't want to post what isn't copywritten.)
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bocodamondo responds:
actually. i allready fixed that.. but aparently the fixed version of the artwork wont be updated :/
Her legs are somehow wrong. (the width is too great)
She has no vagina.
If you are going to do "fan service", then you may want to make it a little more realistic.