well
Durring the intro, I was annoyed.
Later I became slightly less annoyed
It was "mildly amusing"
In a dry, hackneyed sort of way.
I do appreciate the high quality sound. That alone was worth 3 points.
The voice acting was mostely annoying, and hearing the name "Stan" made me want to tie off my vas deferens with my mouse cord. Please choose a less gay/vasectomy inducing moniker.
Dear God, what is up with whining about my character's names? Stan isn't that bad of a name. It definitely didn't make anybody else want to make themselves unable to create offspring. I'm sorry you can't carry on your name to your children anymore... uh... Anti-Clutch...
I'm still waiting to laugh
This may be original, in a sense, but these jokes aren't really funny. I think writing isn't Grim Studio's golden lining. Or art. The music for the intro was ok, but I doubt you made it yourself. If you did, congrats. Like many Newgrounds comedies, this was only funny for you and your friends to make
Yes, I made the music.. and if you look at nearly ALL these reviews, they all say that this was hilarious. I'm sorry you feel this way, but I'd like to see YOU make a Flash that is GODDAMN PERFECT.
interesting
Dude you have got to work on the humor and the whcked out voices, i mean it looks like it will be good but it didnt m make me laugh. So work on that i think it will be when it comes out.
What is up with all these crappy reviews? What happened to all the people who have a friggin sense of humor? Like I keep saying, this is a PILOT. It's meant to see if I have an audience for this thing. I'd like to see YOU make a perfect Flash too with humor that appeals to EVERY GODDAMN PERSON IN THE WORLD.
just a meh...
I don't know I really would like to see some great new comedic talent here on newgrounds but to me this just isn't it. This just seemed mediocre at best (I mean seriously bikini inspector?). I'm not even going to compare it to any current shows because I simply don't see the point because by itself this turns out as a so what? sort of flash. It even saddens me a little that this has a higher average score than some Mike and Andy Parker's work. You say it's difficult to write even semi-original comedy but if you're going to post anything just look at College University and see that it's possible. If you really set your mind to it you could make this series decent.
I'm sorry if it seems harsh I've just seen better.
This is why it's a pilot. If I need help with something, I know exactly what to change. This was written solely by me, but the rest will have a team of writers to help strengthen the scripts. I'd like to see your comedic talents, but you really haven't done anything of note now have you?
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Akwardly humorous. The last part made me . . . think . . . about windows. . . Yay.
Made you... think... about windows? Huh. :)