Not too shabby.
Not bad for a first. Could use a bit of polish, but that should come with experience.
Minor technical thing... the replay button at the end is off to one side of the pencil, rather than on the pencil. Might want to move that over a tad.
yeah, i know. I got lazy when my style improved half way through the movie and never bothered to go back and fix it. the next will have a constant style to it.
i liked it!
i loved it. just fix teh musid d00d. after a while it got really REALLY annoying....
Yeah, well, I coudlnt find a song that went well, so I was forced with a sound loop. Thanks!
WOA
THAT WAS AWESOME but im having trouble believing that was your FIRST movie. i think you mean that this was you first movie posted on ng. but it DID rock
Nope, this was my first. I tried to do tweening, but I still need some practice with that. Thanks!
Pretty good
I like it, I think it should be a little bit higher... but apart from that that, it's pretty good especially for your first flash
thanks. the guys are so low on the screen (if thats what you ment) because I still need a line of referance and used the bottom as just that. Besides, theres no real ground on lined paper.
Everybody doodles in maths
LOL that was great, I doodle like that in my classes too, has to be said though, although the whole movie was great I think the ending was the best bit.
Yeah, I did it because I knew people could relate.