punk fits you better.
sorry dude, this didnt sit with me as well as your other stuff. Im really big into metal (such as progressive, power, symphonic, old school thrash, so on) and this just didnt exactly hit me right. You dont have to be super amazing, but I expect a certain level of quality from yuo because, I know how good you are at the guitar.
I like the electro/orchestral parts..but eh, I dont know what to say, just not for me. I think you needed to do a bit more with your riffs which seem so much simpler compared to your punk stuff (metal isnt one dimensional ya know. :P) and maybe intertwine some more electronic into it for spice. Or maybe becuase it was a bit on the short side or didnt have enough power or diversity with the drums (they just seemed like a time keeper rather than something more and with metal - a lot of it is about the drums (or the rhythem section in general) and working with the guitars). I like your punk stuff better, you seem more comfortable and flexible with it. But that is just me. I like your other stuff though.