Not Bad
Pretty damn good, but if you want to finish this, I suggest that before he avenges his wife, it's not enough to kill himself. He should get fired from his job, go bankrupt, lose his remote, etc. The emotional distress of on loved one isn't enough to kill yourself. ( Everyone goes through it, I did ) Anyway, make him get a gun instead of a sword, and make it a nice battle then he should kill himself. I hope this helps you upon making the rest of this movie. Bye bye