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Reviews for "Eggman's Revenge"

Its not very good really.

Its not bad for someone's first go, but you'll need to improve the dialogue, the plot, and humour in order to make sure any future pieces don't recieve low scores such as this one. Keep it up though, because eventually your stuff will improve.

not bad

don't be worried about the low score, you made it passed judgment, thats a good thing already

the dialogue wasn't really good but the animation and sound quality was decent

the ending did make me laugh

just keep working and you'll improove, but watch out only a few sprite animators have managed to get respect on NG

"your going to get for that"

the dialogue was weak, powerfull weak, some of it didnt even make any sence, like "your going to get for that" in all it could have been better. and by the way, wwhy would sonic call eggman a freak? he is a biped blue sentient hedgehog that can apparently break the sound barrier, thatis freakish my friend, not creating robots.

Eiandvhu responds:

yeah you're right it was lame....
But i'm very bad in storylines.
but good review! i will make more "powerful" dialogue in the future:P

Not bad

the text was hard to read...first part was too small and the black bleneded with the background. 2nd part in the lab...the white did the same. should of used word balloons. Good job though.

Eiandvhu responds:

okay, maybe i'l make speaking bubbles and re-upload

Nice

A bit short, yes, but still- it's ok for a sprite movie, and definately if you're new to flash! I really think you should make another, longer sprite movie! I don't know if this will be blammed, I gave it a 5 because I think it should stay, even if it isn't the greatest...

Please make another, just work harder and longer ^_^